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I'm Back!!!

Yeah so I'm back from my short lived carrer of writing fanfictions for FF.net. Don't worry if you happen to be one of my readers I'll continue writing them but it was hard but yet made you feel good when you wrote one. But yeah I'm gonna be back on my profile more.

PS. I don't think I was a very good fanfiction writter but you could be the judge of that by following this link here

Story on hold

Sorry but I don't have the time to finish this story but I might continue it later on fanfiction(.)net.

News

Ok I know I was going to update this story soon but things keep coming up.But anyways the next chapter will be the last and everyone is going to die in it.

Fatal Encounter(Chapter 6)

Chapter 6 is here and ready to be read.

After the whole ordeal about finding out what the powder really did and Jake
calming down. Jake now laid on the couch in the back of the shop resting and
enjoying not going to school. Fu said he had to stay there while he went out to
get more items to counter the affects of the potion Jake was already exposed to.

"Well something good did come out of this after all," Jake said stretching his
dragon body out on the couch.

"I get to miss school"

Jake than watched TV for a bit until he fell asleep with the TV on and didn't
know what he soon would be face when a hooded figure ran by the shops
window.

Hours later

There was a huge crash sound that woke Jake up with a jolt followed by a
much louder crash followed by a scraping sound of metal on metal.

"What in the world was that," Jake said looking around for any sign of the
cause of the sounds.

Jake got up from the couch and headed toward the front of the shop to
see that beyond the window there was a destroyed police cruiser engulfed
in flames and crushed against a power transformer.

Jake opened the shop door and looked down the block to see a bus over
turned and partly on fire.

Being thankful Halloween was very close Jake flew up into the air and
circled the bus seeing if anyone had survived. He could see at least one
person through the side window and it looked like they were out cold.
As he flew down to rescue the person he discovered something very
shocking.

It was Rose that was knocked out and unmoving in that bus he got
to her and could see that her hand was handcuffed to the rail of the
bus. Jake than used his strength and broke the handcuffs from her
arm and pulled her out of the bus.

Jake looked through the broken window of the bus and could see no
one else in their. Jake was about to pick up Rose and leave but than
he heard a foot step and than Jake turned around to see the killer he
saw before with the same costume and hook charging toward him.

Jake had little time to react but just barely got out of the way and
avoid the deadly hook of death. Jake than grabbed a bar that was
once part of the bus and raised it as a knight would a sword.

The killer than swung his hook and Jake blocked it with the bar
just barely keeping it from hitting him. The killer than pulled the
hook and the bar with it, throwing it to the side.

Jake now was unarmed and the killer swung the hook again at Jake's
head. But Jake just missed it jumping back and grabbing another bar
and swinging it at the killers feet. Shadow it the floor but quickly started
to get back up.

"Hey try this on for size," Jake said

Shadow looked up and got a face full of fire that blew him back and laid
him out against the floor. It seemed like his costume was fire proof since
the fire didn't last that long as well.

But when Shadow looked up and got up from the floor he could see that
Jake and Rose were long gone and the sound of sirens were getting closer
so for now he disappeared through the shadows of the night and waited
for his next chance to strike.

Well this is chapter six and by the time your reading this I'll be watching
Saw 4 so see ya till next time.

Fatal Encounter(Chapter 5)

Well this is chapter 5 so if you did not read 4 pm me your email so I could send
it to you because the site won't let me post it. Now on with the story and also this
chapter will take place a few hours before the events of the end of chapter 4.


Jake flew fast through the air to his grandfather's shop and tried not to be
spotted by anyone from the ground. Jake had to tell his gramps about the
murder and the killer who committed it. Jake was half way there when he
noticed he was right in front of Rose's house and stopped. Jake could see
her through the kitchen window talking on the phone with a face full of
anger. It made him wonder why Rose would be mad and who she was
talking to. But before Jake could use his ear of the dragon and find out
who Rose was talking to. Rose threw the phone against a wall and stormed
out of her house on her way to school.

Jake quickly flew behind a building before she could spot him and watched
as she left for school. "I wonder what got her so mad" Jake said as Rose
departed the area.

After Jake was sure Rose was gone and no one else was around he took
to the sky's again. "Hopefully gramps knows why I can't turn human
again and who this killer could be" Jake said as his grandfather's shop
came into view.

Jake landed on the roof of the shop and looked around to make sure no
one else was around. Then he entered the shop from the stairs that led up to
the roof. Jake walked down the stairs and tried not to make any noise knowing
his grandfather might still be asleep.

"Hey kid shouldn't you be at school?" Fu dog said from the counter reading
a magazine. "I know but the reason I'm is because I can't turn human again
and this killer that might of caused it" Jake said. "Woah woah what's this about
a killer and how is he behind you not being able to change back" Fu said walking
over to Jake.

"I think its because the strange powder he threw in my eyes and also the killer is
some strange guy in a costume. That's going on some killing spree and killing
anyone". Jake said.

"You mean the one killer everyone is talking about on the news that killed that
one guy at the museum?" Fu said.

"Yeah"

"You mean he saw you in dragon form? Jake are you crazy! You could of exposed
the whole magical world!," Fu yelled.

"Fu don't worry he didn't even act scared when he saw me so he must already know the
magical world exists ," Jake said to calm the dog down.

"Well that could be true but still you have to be careful when being a dragon around this
guy.

"I will but Fu where's gramps he needs to know?" Jake asked.

"The council called him this morning wanting to have a meeting with him so he might not
be back till later this afternoon. So we might as well check and see what kind of powder
this guy threw at you to keep you from turning back to your human self," Fu said as he
left to the back of the shop.

"I hope," Jake said.

After performing many tests Fu was able to find out what was the strange powder
and what it exactly did.

"Jake this powder is a very old compound used by hunters when fighting dragons, I'm
surprised this guy had it since the stuff to make it has been outlawed because of
its strange affects on dragons," Fu said amazed.

"What do you mean strange affects?" Jake asked.

"Well kid if you don't change back to your human self soon you'll be stuck this

Way forever and lets just say you will be acting more dragon than usually," Fu said.

"What do you mean more dragon than usually Fu?" Jake asked getting nerves .

"You know those dragons in fairy tales? You'll act like them since this
powder is meant to devolve dragons to what they used to be. But right
now your going through the first stage of it," Fu said.

"What! We need to do something you have to make a potion or something
to fix this," Jake said starting to panic and lose his mind.

"Kid calm down I'll find the right stuff to reveres this just don't go flipping
out on me," Fu said.

To Be Continued

I'm back!

Sorry to everyone thats following the story I needed some
time to myself to think of things.I was only going to be gone for
a day but theirs these fires going on where I live and the powers
been going out because of them.So its kinda hard to write when
the computer keeps going out.Anyways I don't have school the next
day so I'm gonna try and add 2 chapters so I better get started so
see ya.

I Got The Rights to BFC93's Profile!

Well for those of you that don't know BFC93 was a friend of mine
from school that has left tv.com about a week ago and gave me
his profile and everything on it.He said the reason why he left
was because their was nothing to do or something like that.So
now his profile is like a sister profile to mine.But if your wondering
why are user names are similar its because he thought it would
be funny or something.So why does this matter to you? It does
matter since I'll be starting another story on his blog called
"Strange Encounter" that will be a story where Jake and Rose
switch bodys but theirs gonna be a twist to it.So keep an eye
out for it and don't worry I changed the password and my
other story will still continue.

Website Problems

Well I tried to update my story but the site would not let me because
the chapter had to much viloence and the way I described the death
scenes.Also I tried to PM it to people but still the site would not let
it get thruogh.So if anyone wants to read it just PM me your email
address and I'll email it to you.

Fatal Encounter(Chapter 4 Part 2)

At Rose's house.

Rose was watching the news as well and eating her breakfast
then dropped her fork as she saw the message to." What could
it mean" Rose said as she watched the news but then the phone
rang.

Rose looked at it across the kitchen as it rang a second time.

Rose got up and picked up the cordless phone before it could
ring again. Rose looked at the news as it showed the blood
written message again then answered the phone.

"Hello"

"SEE WHAT I SEE?" a low dark voice said.

"Who is this?" Rose replied back looking around the room.

"I THINK YOU KNOW THAT....HUNSGIRL."

"You! your the guy from the museum" Rose said getting angry.

"HA HA HA" the killers laugh sent chills up Rose's spine but she
kept her cool ."YES I AM BUT YOU CAN JUST CALL ME SHADOW".

"I don't care what your name is but the Huntsclan will find you
and when they d-"HA HA HA" the dark laughter stopped Rose from
completing her sentence as Shadow began to speak again.

"YOUR PATHETIC CLAN CAN NOT STOP ME ROSE BUT FOR NOW
I NEED TO GO BUT DON'T WORRY I'LL BE WATCHING YOU".

Then the line went dead and Rose angrily threw the phone against
the wall out of anger as she left for school.

Fatal Encounter(Chapter 4 Part 1)

NOTE:I had some extra time on my hands so I decided to
write another chapter.


BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! CLICK!


The alarm went off as Jake started to get out of bed and
lifted his claw off the off button of the alarm.

Wait! a claw Jake thought as he quikly looked at his dragon
claw and the rest of him to see it in dragon form.I must of
forgot to dragon down when I got home
Jake thought."OK dragon
down"Jake said.Nothing happened"okay dragon down"Jake said
once again but sitll nothing happened.

"Hey Jakearoo are you up yet?"Jake heard his father ask from
the other side of his bedroom door."Uhh...yeah I'm just getting
ready for school"Jake quikly replied back clutching his blanket
tighter around him.

"Okay see you when I get home sport"Jakes father said walking
away.Jake stayed silent until he could no longer hear his fathers
foot steps then let out a sigh of relief.

"Whats wrong with me"Jake said while looking down at the rest of
his body sitll in dragon form.Jake couldn't change back to his human
self and didn't know why.Maybe gramps knows what to do Jake thought.
Then he remembered he also had to tell his granfather about the
almost fatal encounter he had last night.

"That powder must of done this to me"Jake said getting out of bed
and walking towards his door to leave.Jake started walking down the
hall towards the stairs when another door opened."Jake mom said
no dragon powers around the house"Haley said walking out of her
room.

"I know but thats the thing I can't change back"Jake replied."Really?"
Haley said walking over to him aready dressed for school."Yeah now
where's mom?"Jake said."Taking a shower,why?"Haley questioned.
"Because I need you to tell her that I'm going to gramps instead of
school to figure out why I can't change back"Jake said walking past
Haley."Your going to get in trouble"Haley said to her leaving brother.

Jake was now down stairs and passing the living room when he noticed
the T.V. was on and set to the news.But it was what was on the news
that cought Jake's eye.It was the museum where he was at the night
before.But now their were police officers and police cars all around it
with people walking in and out of it things baged up.

The women on the news started talking of what happened at the
museum."Well today folks their seems to have been a murder and
many damages done to are once proud museum today.A gaurd was
killed on duty and many pricless items were destroyed and at this
time police are just clasifying this as a homicide.But the most
terrifying part of this crime is the message that was written in blood
in the gaurds office"the news women said.

A picture was showen that showed the gaurds office wall with the blood
written message.THEY WILL ALL SUFFER was the message that Jake
saw on the T.V. screen before he quikly flew over to his grandfathers
shop to talk to him.

Part 2 might be add soon as well.
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